The Official Writing Challenge
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This beautiful poem is so full of hope and inspiration, I'm singing "hallelujah!" along with the narrator. I like the rhyme of the last lines.
Beautifully portrayed - like sitting on the window sill of Heaven. Very moving -
'Salt tear rivulets trailed down my face; overwhelmed by majesty, I cried.' Such inspirig and thrilling picture of the Ric Wedding Feast of the Lamb. Thankyou

05/05/12
Lovely...this gave me goose bumps. So elegant and extravagant in its execution...and filled with pure love for the Lord.

Wonderful...Thank you.

God Bless~
05/07/12
Wow. Gripping. Worth a second read to capture the images once again. Awesome.
This is so lovely. There is so much hidden gems in each line. A very rich poem indeed,
05/10/12
This is beautiful, Beth. Congratulations on your EC! <3
05/10/12
Beth, this piece is packed with imagery that stirs the soul. Beautiful in content, excellent in delivery and reads like a prayer. No surprise that this was among the EC winners.
I often dream of this. Your words exceed anything I could dream of. Splendid writing!