The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/10
Love the last line. What a fascinating take on the topic, and how realistic you made the situation.
05/12/10
oh, what a mystery... I could see this ("Through a single touch, she could insert herself into the histories and learn.") as a springboard to more stories. Super creative idea here!
05/12/10
I had to read it twice, but I DID get it. Very creative idea... and well written.
Very original and clever. I think the reference to the scroll with the 'ancient teachings of Jesus' was a third writing that she had seen at a different time? It confused me a bit, but with re-reading I think I understand. A very unique gift for this 'futuristic' story, great imagination.