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01/15/09
I really like this. The format is different...and it works. I love the grand tour of our country...very interesting. Very nice job with the topic.
01/15/09
Yes, it is different and the difference makes the words hold that much more punch. Nicely done.
Thanks for taking me around the U.S.A.

Blessings on your writing.
01/17/09
A real dance of poetry and prose. Very engaging and well done.
01/17/09
Definitely a creative take on the topic. Love the snapshots.
Your divergent pictures show well the USA.
01/19/09
Very interesting and unusual piece!

I didn't understand a couple of the scenes presented, but I was intrigued overall with your "slices of America."

I liked how you ended it, too!
Creative way to tell so many stories in so few words.
This is so very beautiful. Makes me feel all the more blessed to be born in such a great nation.
01/20/09
Wonderful snapshots! I get the impression that these were all experienced by you or by people you know. I enjoyed reading this very much.
Love this unique take on the topic.

As a little side note, I've been to the Glorieta Baptist Encampment in New Mexico. It is beautiful.

This was a very enjoyable read. Well done.