The Official Writing Challenge
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A good view of the tempations of Christ... Have always wandered what the Lord did in those 39 days before... ( though I dont think he had dessert while out there... :) )
Wonderfully written entry, a creative take on "walk." You've made the temptation of Jesus come alive for me. One nit-pick - in the 2nd paragraph, "to" should be "too." Also, I'm not sure if I like the ending. I mean, I like what you said but think it could have been more powerful had you not inerjected your thoughts but ended in story-fashion. But that's just me. It probably works for many others. Overall, very well done!
Because this is the Masters - I can point out...that "TOO often we glaze over" is the correct spelling of "to"-in the next to last paragraph. I did not quite understand why a man named Jeshua was duplicating what Jesus had gone through with Satan, unless he was just dreaming; Anyway, a nice repeating of that trial by fire that Satan pulled on Jesus after His 40 days of fasting. Well done.