The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/06
This is SO well done. The explanation at the end was helpful, but, regardless, I was definitely engrossed in why in the world these people were being paid to leave the country! You definitely gave me an entirely new perspective on missionaries. Thanks!
07/28/06
The explanation clinched it for me. This was a great piece. I love true stories and you totally had me fooled! Great build up! Wodnerful job on this one!
07/29/06
Needless to say - a VERY confusing story up until the italics; then things became clear with some additional info. Thanks for sharing.
07/30/06
I love the way you chose to weave this amazing story. Fantastic!
08/01/06
Very well-crafted piece. Confusing in the beginning? Yes. But that's what added to the beauty of the piece when it all came together in the end. Loved it.
08/01/06
I love the way you chose to write this--you really reeled in the readers. One small note: no apostrophe in "missions." Thanks so much for spotlighting this wonderful family.
You pulled me in from the first sentence until the very end. Wonderfully crafted and inspiring.
08/02/06
Delightful and captivating. Loved the sense of mystery. You had me hooked from the start.
I liked the mystery of this story--not knowing what exactly was going on until the last part of section one. So neat to hear the history in sevtion two, also. Good job!
08/03/06
I'm really glad this story did so well. it really stuck with me all week.
Congratualtions Glenn!