The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, this was great. You've got me laughing out loud. I've read several serious pieces on this topic, and it's nice to find a light one as my last read for the day.

Thanks for sharing this, and God bless,

I love the comparisons!! And this line made me laugh out loud: "Kind of like Sly Stone, only you knew Al was saying something really deep and you just didn’t get it, where Sly was saying something even he didn’t understand." Hehehe. Did I tell you I love your work?
Very entertaining. I love a story I don't have to struggle through. Very smooth and confident writing. Now I got a secret, don't tell, but I just listened to Frankenstein (sp?) the other night. More caucasion than Egdar Winter. Loved it!
God Bless!!
Loved it! A favorite for sure. The last paragraph was more than great it was awesome!
Don't know Al Green - but I dig your writing, your story and your love of soul. Thanks for sharing!
Oh, so many great lines! What a marvelous writer's voice you have!
ah...this was a very satisfying read.