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06/23/06
I like the way you contrasted your article in two parts - the one on death and the other on life, abundant life. Your piece was clearly written and your quotes of scripture brought your idea home very directly.
06/23/06
What a contrast! Well done.
06/24/06
I really liked the different POVs here. It was like that scripture amplified and expressed in first person. Great job!
06/27/06
I relish this parallel contrast between the arrogant agent of death and the victorious Living Savior:

"Once they have eaten the fruit of the tree, Death will reign... And once it is done, it cannot be undone."

"Once they have eaten the fruit of the tree, my body and my blood, Life will reign... Once the price is paid, it need never be paid again. They shall dwell in the house of the Lord forever."