The Official Writing Challenge
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06/23/06
Interesting choice of format - this piece almost begs to be put to music. Wonderful lyrics.
I agree: this is so musical and romantic!
06/24/06
So, so tender and sweet. I'm imagining an old, old man writing this to his sweetheart of many years. Love it.
Oh, my, this is precious...beautiful. The form of this poem is just right for the bittersweet quality it carries. This poem seems simple at first, but it draws its reader into a lovely depth.