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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 4 – Masters)
Topic: Abundance (06/08/06)

TITLE: The Books of Life
By Thomas Kappel
06/13/06


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Abundance

In Life

Step by step
From birth to death
we walk through
the abundance of days
in the decades of life
moving from scene to scene
relationship to relationship
experience to experience
building and erasing
debts of the spirit, soul,
and body while encountering
love, understanding, and wisdom.

In the Book of Life

The abundance of life
is recorded in memories,
emotions, soul, and spirit
written into the body
of the individualís
book of life.
Gathered there in sleep by
Godís appointed Beings
of the Hierarchies
and recorded in
Godís full Book of Life.

In Judgment

The abundance of oneís life
and life opportunities
as recorded in the book is
examined and accounting given
to He who forgave you,
paid your price, and gave you
undying love.

In Heaven

Surrounded by souls
that shared the abundance
in life recorded in the book
enclose you in love,
sympathy, and understanding
to continue on through eternity
one with another
sharing abundant love
in companionship with
God.


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Melanie Kerr 06/17/06
I liked the progression of the poem from life, salvation, death and Judgement, and then on to eternity. It was a well structured poem.
Linda Watson Owen06/18/06
Yes, strong progression here. I especially like the first section and your use of the active voice there.