The Official Writing Challenge
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awwww, touching story. Almost made me cry at the end. Well done!
Great story! Good names for your characters--makes them more memorable. I liked the imagery you used, too. The old pickup brought back some memories for me. I hope you win!
So sad but so sweet. Such a wonderful tender story. I loved the names that you chose, they added so much life to the bitter circumstances.
A Master, without doubt.
Show why you're in level 4 - Master quality all the way.
Your title was clever, and the story was really touching. The way you kept bringing back the same ideas worked really well.