The Official Writing Challenge
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You've done an excellent, creative job on the topic. I loved the title, so perfect. You kept this short and really allowed the reader to understand your message without being too wordy. very good job!
I can see why you are in the Master class. Your poem is superb. It is worth publishing. It is really an outstanding message.
This gritty ditty is very pretty – I can’t find a fault, not even an itty-bitty, If I could write something half as witty, I wouldn’t be wallowing in self-pity! :-)
This is great, Jan! I love the content, choice of words, flow. Wonderful. Jo
Excellent message, excellent use of words, Jan.
Very nice Jan. I did not realize you wrote poetry, too. Impressive.
At first I thought the "-ity's" were going to distract from the message, but they didn't.

Crafted nicely. Loved the message. Good Job!
Well-written poem, Jan! I liked the end where the demons are sent running. :):)

Very nice poem, short but to the point. Very well done, I enjoyed it.
Very clever, creative & out of the box!
Yes! Very much "out of the box," yet right on target! Wonderful creativity - but then again, I wouldn't expect anything less from you. Superb.
Blessings, Lynda
Very creative rhythm & rhyme scheme. Loved it! I can't believe you found so many words ending in "arity". And you wove them all together with a wonderful message. Hurray for you!!!
Oh, Jan, this is great! What a poetic treat! Love the cadence, the wonderful rhyme, and the overall light but pointed treatment of 'prosperity'! Super poem!!
Creative! and a touch of humor - really enjoyed it!
So many layers to enjoy! What a feast!

It's all been said before, but, this is really excellent work! Love those words! :)
Wonderful! A true portrait of prosperity.
This is wonderful. Such a creative entry. Good work.
Really liked this. Very nicely constructed and the word choice was right on track. Of course, the message goes without saying!
Bravo! Excellent in every way! Love that interruption!
Creative, humorous, a great work - I expected nothing less.
Ditto, ditto, and ditto. OUTSTANDING! ;-D