The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the way you contrasted the principalities above and us here, and brought out the love of God. Good job.
There are a lot of truths here... I enjoyed it as much the second and third reads as I did the first. Some depth as well. Good work. My one fault, the word combos didn't flow easily... so it made the piece kind of stick as I read it. Probably more a me thing than the work itself. Overall, very well done.
You have such precision in your verse and structure. How do you do that? Mypoetry is all over the place ... kind of like me, I suppose. Great writing!