The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/06
I like the way you contrasted the principalities above and us here, and brought out the love of God. Good job.
05/08/06
There are a lot of truths here... I enjoyed it as much the second and third reads as I did the first. Some depth as well. Good work. My one fault, the word combos didn't flow easily... so it made the piece kind of stick as I read it. Probably more a me thing than the work itself. Overall, very well done.
05/09/06
You have such precision in your verse and structure. How do you do that? Mypoetry is all over the place ... kind of like me, I suppose. Great writing!