The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 429 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
02/10/18
Great story with a powerful message...peace within.

Blessings~
02/10/18
Nice!
02/11/18
You've captured and maintained the inner voice of your MC so credibly that I had to keep reading to a terrific close. Well done.
Very well written story.
God Bless.
02/15/18
Congratulations on your 3rd place Francy.

The way in which the MC handled the situation was much more effective than seeking revenge.