The Official Writing Challenge
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11/10/17
Sweet!
Blessings~
11/10/17
I really liked the MC's character development, her subtle sarcasm and wit.

















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11/14/17
I felt the MC's embarrassment at not being chosen, we've all been there! Loved the seagull description.
I like the message in this story - having moved 3x in my school years I can relate. Glad compassion won the day - and the friend!
11/16/17
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Lucy.

I think you should consider turning your short story into a YA novel.
11/17/17
Good work
12/28/17
Congratulations on your win in the quarterly contest, Lucy.

I really enjoyed this story and thin you could make it into a children's or YA book.