The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/17
What a sweet story about a girl and her grandparents. And I love that Becky is a reader. Good writing. God bless.
10/18/17
I love how you presented the beauty of a storm. Well done.
I've never seen such a storm, but you made me feel like I was right there. I loved the interaction between Becky and Grandpa. Congratulations on ranking 16 overall. Happy Dance.
10/20/17
This is a lovely, tender grandparent-grandchild story. You've done a great job of painting a vivid picture of the storm. Great writing!
10/22/17
Noel,

This is such a well written informative and moving story. I loved the sweet relationship between the grandparent and grandchild.

Excellent overall, I really enjoyed this.

Blessings~