The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the out-of-the-box concept of aspects of nature being neighbors, and the lovely painting you render with your words.
Technically speaking, for structured verse, the meter is a bit inconsistent, but I didn't find that it diminished the overall effect.
I think you made outstanding use of slant rhymes.
I hope this does well!
06/13/17
Nicely done,
I'll sure this will garner attention from the judges.

Blessings~
06/15/17
Congratulations on your 7th place finish, Verna.

I love the concept for this poem. I'm adding it to my favorites.
06/15/17
Oh, I love this, Verna. Congratulations!
06/20/17
Verna, I absolutely adored this. It was such a different way of looking at the topic of "neighbor." Loved it.

Blessings! Deb