The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/17
Interesting read and written well. Thanks!
05/22/17
I loved this. You brought the characters to life in a lovely story. Well done.
05/25/17
Nicely done.
Blessings~
Congratulations, Karen, on your EC for this delightful tale.
This was pretty good. I liked how you used understandable things to say what salvation is and is not.

Continued quotes like a rock should start with a capital.

It would help if you could give what valuable stone has something valuable inside. We have to pan through a lot of dirt to get to the gold.