The Official Writing Challenge
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Love the miracle transfer from dull to bright in this poem, where color and mood have a total change.
05/18/17
I found this poem beautifully moving. You draw us into the colorless sadness and pain of imprisonment really well, then end with colorful hope. This you do with powerful use of rhyme. Well written!
05/25/17
Beautiful.
Blessings~