The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/17
It must have been very difficult for the MC to loose her physical strength and not be able to communicate her wants and needs. Fortunately, she had a caregiver who understood.
05/12/17
Congratulations on placing 1st place this week, Amy.

I was so happy that the MC will get her chance to walk on water!
07/09/17
I love this, Ann! I especially love the ending. Kept hoping someone would hand her a letter board to communicate or something. But I still love it just like you have it. Congrats on third place BOB!
07/10/17
Superb job of depicting the MC's thoughts. I felt instantly drawn into the story. And of course, the ending was "icing on the cake."

Congratulations!!!
07/23/17
Just excellent - and what a fabulous ending. Masterfully crafted - no wonder you were a BoB winner!