The Official Writing Challenge
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You do an excellent job of weaving the past with the present, holding the suspense throughout, and getting the reader to empathize with the MC. I expect this to do well.
03/11/17
A well-told story. However, I was a bit confused at the ending. I thought the jury had decided against the accused.Perhaps I missed something.
03/13/17
Nicely done.
Blessings~
03/15/17
Intriguing, heartbreaking story. Well done.