The Official Writing Challenge
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It is so hard for a mother to leave her children when she goes to work and equally difficult to raise someone else's child.
This is so true. So many want what someone else has without realizing their own blessings. Great take on the topic.
Good job! I loved this take on the subject. We are so like this, all of us.
Congratulations, Cindy, on your 4th place finish.

Your story was well done and a great reminder to be thankful for our blessings.
This was a clever way to portray both sides in the same scene. I like how they both came to the same conclusion in their daydream--to appreciate what they have. Congratulations!
What a sadly truthful contrast. If they could have just talked to each other...

Great story. Hopefully we can teach our children to learn balance and not live a life of extremes.

Good job!
You did a wonderful job getting into the heads of the MC's opposing sides of the mommy spectrum.