The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/16
It is so hard for a mother to leave her children when she goes to work and equally difficult to raise someone else's child.
12/15/16
This is so true. So many want what someone else has without realizing their own blessings. Great take on the topic.
Good job! I loved this take on the subject. We are so like this, all of us.
12/22/16
Congratulations, Cindy, on your 4th place finish.

Your story was well done and a great reminder to be thankful for our blessings.
12/23/16
This was a clever way to portray both sides in the same scene. I like how they both came to the same conclusion in their daydream--to appreciate what they have. Congratulations!
01/14/17
What a sadly truthful contrast. If they could have just talked to each other...

Great story. Hopefully we can teach our children to learn balance and not live a life of extremes.

Good job!
02/14/17
You did a wonderful job getting into the heads of the MC's opposing sides of the mommy spectrum.