The Official Writing Challenge
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This story is great. You really brought the MC to life. To hear it is based on a true story makes it more incredible.
I wonder if Albert was the only one at CFF who was praying for the churches he had to go talk to. Or was anyone at CFF praying for their clients.

All we can be sure of is that God is in control and his will will be done on earth as it is in heaven no matter who is praying.

I thought the scenario was well put together. Emotions were felt and displayed. The timing was right. The description of "the key figure" most meaningful. It helped tell the story.
11/28/16
Great storytelling. I knew the story would end this way, but I didn't realize that it was based on real events. God does really supply all our needs.