The Official Writing Challenge
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10/13/16
Poor Tanya. I'm glad she found a group to pray with her. And my head itched reading about the lice. *sigh* God bless.
10/15/16
Great story! A couple of things that I wondered about: the line "but the woman next to her did it first" confused me as to what the lady next to her was going to explain. But maybe it's just me in my confusion. :) The lines in bold really "stick out"...I just wondered if they could have been in italics? I don't know what's customary.
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