The Official Writing Challenge
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Delightful story--love the ending!
I liked the family life adventure, maybe taken from real life. The ending was natural and also real life but I didn't quite get how "Mom" got in the picture.

The writing made the day go fast.
09/14/16
Partners in crime with Grandma. I love it!
09/15/16
Congrats!
God bless~
09/15/16
Congratulations on your well deserved 1st place win Holly! The ending was a surprise that made me giggle! Loved it!
09/15/16
Congrats on your first place and for this lovely glimpse of real life.
09/15/16
Congrats on your placing for this conspiratorial tale. Well done.
Holly, Congratulations on your first place finish in EC. I had to read it several times bofore I caught the twist ending. Greta must have been the character's mother.

By your apt descriptions of the charaters, I naturally thought of two daughters playing together and getting inti michief.

Delightful read.
09/30/16
ahh hahaha -Good one my dear.

You crafted an utterly precious and delightful tale.

Big grin across my face.

Congratulations on your first place win.