The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this creative idea carried through with a good story.
08/25/16
Wow! Very creative idea. I'd love to see this expanded out into a longer story or novella. There is just too much potential here for the word limit. You did a great job with getting your characters to the topic of understanding love in a very short time, but I'd love to see the longer version where your MC has to struggle and overcome the basics before the break-thru emotions.

That's not criticism, however. You did an excellent job on this entry. I just want more of this story at a greater depth than what you could do here.

Thanks for sharing it with us.
08/26/16
Congratulations on your EC. I enjoyed this story very much. I could tell they weren't a normal class very early in the story (I used to be a teacher!). Very creative and interesting to be teaching emotions. Well written.
09/02/16
Love love love your line about what love is!

Nicely done.