The Official Writing Challenge
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08/11/16
Loved the imagery of the challenge. Well done
Someone's been spying... :D Seriously fun story. The humor keeps its sting of truth from being too intense.
08/18/16
I love it. If it's a disease, then I think I have it too, although not quite a stage four like this couple. I love the plea for Jesus to come soon, so they wouldn't have to clean up the mess. Good job.
Great story! Congratulations for 3rd place in EC.
08/18/16
Great job Francy! As always your humor had me smiling throughout. As soon as I saw your name, I knew I had to read it.

You do such a good job here of showing us the personalities of your characters through detailed imagery. Showing us the consequences of their procrastination (tall weeds, piled boxes, etc) tells all we need to know. I love how far you took it (the front door has disappeared!). You had me chuckling throughout.

Congratulations on a well deserved top placement!
08/18/16
Great story and well deserving of your EC win. Congratulations.
08/18/16
Congratulations on your placing. Great work.
Well done, Francy. I found myself chuckling a little too much with familiarity!
08/18/16
Congratualations, Francy, on your 3rd place. I love this story and with its truths and humor. Great writing!
08/24/16
Congratulations, Francy, on winning 3rd place in the EC awards this week.

I laughed and cried. I fear the MCs were not just procrastinators but hoarders as well.

You are such a gifted writer, Francy, and I enjoy reading your work,

It should have read: [may] make a house call.
08/28/16
Perfect picture of procrastination overdrive.

Well done and congratulations on your EC placing.