The Official Writing Challenge
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08/11/16
AWESOME STORY!

You got me. I didn't suspect a thing.

Claire
08/12/16
This one tugs at the heartstrings. I loved it.
08/13/16
Touching work. Clever title.
08/14/16
This is excellent! The topic, the title and Caroline's silence gave it away for me, but that didn't matter one bit. The inner dialogue of your MC's guilt-ridden grief was raw and authentic.

Great job! Thanks for sharing this with us!
08/14/16
I didn't catch on to what was going on until the last paragraph took me completely by surprise. You have told this moving story very well indeed. And how could anyone not be moved by its message.
08/16/16
Oh my gosh. This was amazing. I never suspected the ending, It was realistic all the way through.
Wow! The reasons why this hits me square in the gut today are countless. Well done, I see a winner.
Just beautiful!
I've read this a few times and found it absolutely beautiful. I thought I knew the direction it was taking - but was wrong! The ending took me by surprise but was so very moving. Great writing. Congratulations.
08/30/16
Sad but unfortunately often true result of procrastination-Tragic regret.

Well written. Congratulations on you EC placing.