The Official Writing Challenge
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This story is superbly executed, never once using the word "eerie," yet infusing its essence throughout. You hold the suspense all the way through, and leave me wondering just what was in that eerie envelope...
08/09/16
How eerie! The feel of someone watching is the worst! I love your descriptions. Perfection! I'm so glad you didn't leave us hanging with the MC locked out. I'd be interested to know if you thought about it. :)
08/09/16
This was a great read! Suspense sprinkled with humor. Great job!