The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/16
These are good truths you've penned. The world whispers different all the time.
08/02/16
Nicely done. Love, love, love the opening line! Also enjoyed the beautiful flow, of words, and tone, and emotion.
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You succinctly illustrate the competing voices of trust and doubt, with trust triumphing, of course! I, too, like the alliteration in your first line.