The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/16
Oh, Mike. We all identify with you. Or, at least, many of us do. Delightful poem. God bless.
06/16/16
Very entertaining, with an ending that was well worth the weight!
06/19/16
Poor Mike. His saga somehow sounds familiar.A lot of diets fizzle out like his.
This is wonderful. The rhymes are great, and the truth is way too true. Poems aren't my thing usually, but this week, the Masters have done an outstanding job with their lyrics. I thought the take on the topic was a hoot and a perfect fit as well.
06/23/16
Congrats!

Well done.

God bless~
06/23/16
Thanks for this - you are a real poet!

Congratulations
06/23/16
Congratulations, Cindy, on winning an EC award this week.

Like Mike, my diet has fizzled out many a time. At first I thought that Mike had cut out fruits and vegetables and all good foods from the diet, but then I realized you meant all the tasty treats.
06/23/16
Maybe Mike should have gone on two diets - because there's never enough to eat in one! But congratulations on your EC.
06/24/16
Congratulations, Cindy, on your EC. Well deserved.
06/25/16
Congratulations on your EC.
07/07/16
Cute little ditty with a great message about moderation.