The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/16
A touch of irony pervades this very descriptive piece, for it keeps getting stronger as it fizzles towards the conclusion.
Graphic and sobering stuff.
06/17/16
A touch of irony pervades this very descriptive piece, for it keeps getting stronger as it fizzles towards the conclusion.
Graphic and sobering stuff.
Wow, this is powerful. I can totally relate, yet I never thought of losing color, but oh what a brilliant fit. Tiny red ink is you slipped into the universal you in the middle. In my opinion, the first person voice in this piece is so powerful. I can really only think of wow! So, I'll say it again, wow! Great take on the topic, creative, passionate, and the pain was palpable. It's on the top of my favorites list so far this week (and may even be on all-time favorite list).