The Official Writing Challenge
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06/03/16
No...don't stop- I want to read more. I'm a little confused by the ending, but otherwise, a wonderful read.
06/08/16
The ending was a bit confusing--not enough time for her to finish or for the reader to see her finish.

Other than that, I enjoyed the story.
Congratulations on ranking 18 overall. Happy Dance!