The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/16
Bullies and abusive stories make me cringe and so sad. This was difficult for me to read, but the ending offered some hope. Maybe because I was bullied at school, it was a disturbing read. But, well written.

Blessings~
05/12/16
The story confused me for awhile. I was thinking she had no food but then she did have a lunch bag. It was the cheese that was the problem. Sounds kind of like the new lunch programs foisted on today's kids.
05/12/16
Congrats Sara,

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Congratulations, Sara, on your EC for this complex, touching story, crowned with compassion and hope.
05/12/16
Congratulations. Sara, on your 5th place EC award. Unfortunately, the school sometimes has more power than the parent.
05/15/16
Congratulations on 5th Place EC.
05/19/16
Poor kiddo. You did a good job making your young MC 's plight believable.
Very enjoyable read. What happened to Radha happens in many school settings.