The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/16
A lot of energy in this piece, It was easy to read beginning to end. Your voice matched your characters perfect. There was one line I really loved but I forgot. Ha. I look when I'm done and comment again. But nicely done. A wicked pace but I was able to keep up with you and you stayed on topic wonderfully. Very good.
04/14/16
This was my fav line: and I’m reminded again how our twinship is opposite sides of the same coin.

Well done.
04/16/16
Thank you for this peek behind the curtain of your MC's thought processes as she causes our heads to bob in understanding "Uhn-huh".

Hope your days become better than your dreams. Keep it coming—you're on point.
04/16/16
It was frantic, but you did such a great job of taking us along for the ride of a worst-day-ever! :)

I think I can top yours, but, hey, we all get one every now and then.

I love how real your character was and the disjointed writing style you employed to such great effect.
04/16/16
Interesting and easy read...well done.


Blessings~
You did a nice job of pacing this. I was almost out of breath by the time I got to the end. You tackled the topic in a fun interesting way.
04/21/16
Congrats,
Blessings~
04/21/16
Congratulation, Sara, on your 10th place EC award.

My favorite line was: I'm reminded again how our twinship is opposite sides of the same coin. Since I am a twin, I could relate.


i believe you left a verb out of this sentence: "I can't people today."
04/21/16
Congratulations, Sara, on your EC place. I enjoyed your hectic story of a hectic day. The pace matched the story well. Well done!
05/10/16
Really cute characterization of a working gals day.I have actually used a post it note a few times so that gave me a giggle.
Well done and congratulations on your EC placing.