The Official Writing Challenge
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03/10/16
Interesting way of expressing the theme.
Nailed the topic.This story gave us insight into the Amish community. I kike the twist of a twin brother at the end.
03/11/16
Nicely done!

Enjoyed it very much.

God bless~
03/12/16
Very interesting use of the topic. Sometimes I got confused as to who was speaking and had to re-read it. You sometimes used commas where they were not needed.