The Official Writing Challenge
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03/02/16
I'm glad his co-workers appreciate his service and sacrifice.

Well written.
You do such a good job of portraying the MC and his passion. My heart ached for him. I didn't see the ending coming, but you showed what real love and admiration is. Your pacing was perfect in this delightful piece.
03/03/16
Congratulations, Cindy, on your 6th place EC award.
03/19/16
You crafted your story through to a beautiful climax with all the cards waiting for Joe when he awoke.