The Official Writing Challenge
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02/26/16
Excellent writing and a good teaser. The way you left things hanging is difficult to pull off but you did it well. You might have alluded to several possible conclusions which could occur, forcing your readers to speculate on the outcomes of each one. I enjoyed the dual conflict: the case itself and whether or not she'd take the case. I'm still thinking... ☺ Blessings.
03/02/16
Original and fresh take on this week's challenge. It was one of my favorites; I hope it does well. I'm not sure who the real lawyer in the family is.

I wasn't sure if the word doesn't was incorrect grammar or the word choice of the daughter.
Congratulations on ranking 11th overall. Happy Dance!