The Official Writing Challenge
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02/05/16
Aaaah, this is as memorizing as that cake! You wove your description of comfort food in with a comforting friend so well. And I love the meaningful, but not sappy ending. It made me very hungry for chocolate too. I'll forgive you for that! :):)
02/08/16
Great writing. Well done, not too sweet,(except for the cake)and full of feeling.
02/10/16
I totally enjoy "sweet" stories and happy endings...and this was all that and more.

God bless~
02/10/16
This story would have also fit under the delicious topic. I liked the way the MCs could relate to one another.
Congratulations on ranking 14th overall! Happy Dance!