The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/16
Powerful and traumatic description of a regrettably frequent event. Well done.
01/30/16
Dramatic and authentic in content and delivery.

Well done.

God bless~
01/30/16
It is sad that so many are not able to openly express their Christian faith. Also, I can't imagine what it would be like to be a child bride.

I liked your story and believe that it could be expanded on easily if it were not for our word limit.

Good job!
02/02/16
Relevant and well written story. I am so glad the MC had the courage to rescue her. I hope this does well in the challenge this week.
02/04/16
Congratulations! A very well-deserved win.
Nicely done, Gary. Congratulations!
02/04/16
Powerful in content and delivery. Very well done. Congratulations!
Congrats Gary. ..great job!
What an inspiring story, and yet heart-wrenching, too, because we know that this is not fiction, but reality for so many. Congratulations on the win.
02/04/16
Congratulations, Gary, on your 1st place EC award.

This is such a relevant story. I am glad the judges awarded this well written piece of writing.
02/04/16
Congratulations on your win. Well done.
02/05/16
Congratulations on your win! It is well deserved. You have dared to tell of what many avoid telling and you've told it very well.
02/10/16
Congrats!

God bless~
02/16/16
Thank you for your penetrating portrait of two young lives. It was one of those 'wow' pieces for me.