The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/15
You've packed so much into this entry, without cluttering the quality of your message. Well done.
The last paragraphs tugged at my heart. Had to dab my eyes a little. I know you only had 750 words, but I think you could develop this into a story. Keep writing.
10/12/15
Wow! What an amazing story. I loved it. This is a winner for sure, I would say.

All the best. :)
10/13/15
Inspirational.
God bless~
10/14/15
Powerful story! You did a great job of capturing his hurt and disappointment but also the hope. Well done.
Congratulations on ranking 25 overall! Happy Dance!