The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/15
This is beautiful. I love your vivid descriptions, the format, and the hopeful message. Great job!
10/09/15
I love the creativity and the vividness of your work. Very imaginative material that invites us to spread our wings as well.
This is really good. You painted a thoughtful picture with your words. I enjoyed the read.
10/11/15
You did an excellent job painting a vivid picture that I could see as I read your narrative poem. Thoroughly enjoyed it and the hope given at the end is tremendously encouraging.
10/12/15
You did a great job with this. I love the victory at the end that comes from trusting in God.

All the best. :)
10/13/15
Excellent!
God bless~
10/13/15
This poem is so nicely written; the serenity of the Spirit is apparent.
10/15/15
Congrats on your HC and EC. Well done.
10/17/15
Congratulations on your 5th place EC award.

10/24/15
I felt your pain when the swallow's beak snapped shut around the tiny butterfly. Good job, thanks for writing this, and congratulations on being an EC winner!