The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/15
I love the contrast between the setting of the story and the optimism that flows through your characters - and especially how you have wrapped it up.
10/13/15
Great conclusion to a powerful entry.

God bless~
This is brilliant. You brought your characters to life. I wanted to feel sorry for them, but it wasn't really possible since I slightly envy Louis' zest for life! You did a wonderful job of bringing both kinds of zest into this charming story. Congratulations on your 1st place EC. It is well deserved. Happy Dance!
10/15/15
Congratulations on your first place EC award, Virgil. I could visualize every scene. Unforgettable characters. Well deserving of the award.
10/15/15
Congratulations on your 1st Place ranking! It is an easy and delightful read. Well deserved.
10/15/15
Congratulations on your win and your EC. Great writing.
10/17/15
Masterfully done, Virgil. Congrats.
10/24/15
Congratulations on EC first! The world needs more Luis's, more optimistic outlooks. Love the title . God bless your writing efforts.