The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/15
I enjoyed this entry which was loaded with fun and eye-rolling humor--loved the ending. Thanks for the smiles!
08/28/15
What a great tale! It completely entertains from the beginning to the LOL-ending. :) You are a master at dialects. Dave, Gerry, and Arnold--what a cast of characters. Can they be in a movie (or at least another story)? :) Excellent!
08/28/15
This was a delightful story. I like that the MCs were male menopause victims. Terrific use of dialect and classic ending.
08/28/15
A great tale with an egg-stremely funny ending. You have a great way with them thar accents and turns of speech. Most enjoyable.
08/29/15
I have to agree with all the above comments, and this Injun-uity is ingenious. You took me back donkey's years with the accent to when 'Westerns' were on the TV every night. Bonanza was my favourite closely followed by Waggon Train. I didn't know how this fun read would end but 'scrambled' is perfect. Great job!
08/29/15
Excellent job!

God bless~
Eggs-actly the right story to brighten my day It reminded me of the old wild west stories. Tumblin' tumbleweeds that was a great tale. You mite say in-genius.
08/30/15
I was 'scrambling' to guess this Egg-ceptional ending, hoping he'd run into the injun again:) What an entertaining read:) this one shows us the sunny-side of your personality:) Well done
Brilliantly done :) there's very little I can add to the above, egg-cept awesome piece, which I'm hoping to see in the winner's circle.
09/03/15
Noel,

What's happening have you been taking lessons from Milly Born? That would explain the surge of recent wins!

Hahahahaha! You know I'm kidding...excellent job.

Congrats!

God bless~
09/03/15
Congratulations on your 7th place EC award, Noel. It was injunious.
Noel,

Congratulations on your win in EC. As the wise Indian chief would say, "How! How you come up with all those in-genius story ideas. Definitely a gift from God.
09/04/15
Excellent as always. I was quite disappointed when your character pulled off his headress and reverted to normal speech. I had been so enjoying the hilarious writing!
09/05/15
Congrats Noel. A well deserved EC.I thought it might be in the winners' list.
09/05/15
hahaha scrambled indeed, how else?