The Official Writing Challenge
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08/14/15
:) Poor Eddie. He did have a great and souvenir-worthy vacation, though. I'm glad the MC didn't try to right any gullibility. Now, where will Eddie go on his future travels, to see scared trees at the Petrified Forest, perhaps? This is a super creative entry that begins with the title! I enjoyed everything about this.
08/14/15
Awww, poor simple Eddie. He deserves a friend like you. But I'm left wondering which high school you both attended. I mean, like attracts like - dunnit?

Before I think up more derogatory comments I'll just say that I enjoyed this unique take on the topic, and especially the introduction of the lavatorial humour in the final paragraph.

Great job and very eddie-fying!
08/15/15
Good old Gullible Eddie with his unusual souvenirs! I enjoyed this very much. Just wait till he shows the MC his photos - might be very interesting! Great writing!
08/15/15
Love the title and the fun story. My favorites by far are the roamin' umpires... Wish I had some of your talent to make my writing punnier!
Great fun to read, and I'm guessing, great fun to write! Love the title too. Thanks for bringing the smiles - I thought this one had your name all over it!
Great fun to read, and I'm guessing, great fun to write! Love the title too. Thanks for bringing the smiles - I thought this one had your name all over it!
Great fun to read, and I'm guessing, great fun to write! Love the title too. Thanks for bringing the smiles - I thought this one had your name all over it!
08/15/15
Great story! I love the play on words, and the creativity.
08/15/15
Hahaha! So cute and witty! I loved the title.
08/15/15
I think Eddie would be an interesting character in a book. Maybe his next adventure could be, Green Acres.
Haha! Gotta love Eddie and his ambiences and cistern chapels. Very clever humour! Thank you for a fun and enjoyable read.
08/16/15
Funny stuff Noel! I know an Eddie or two myself. They make great friends, don't they?

Good, entertaining writing:)
08/20/15
It might not have been chosen for an EC award, but good comedy is hard to write. Thank you for making me laugh.
08/20/15
Noel,

Admist your admirers, I am but one more...great job!

God bless~