The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/15
Great story with a powerful message. It has an authentic tone to it.

God Bless~
04/20/15
Wow - if this isn't a true story, it absolutely read like one. You totally pulled me in and you still haven't let go. Love Vanessa - and I wanna be like her. EVERY city needs one.
So hard to be a Vanessa! You wrote a great character into life. Topic was certainly covered in your story. I hope she comes back soon, too... In another story! Congrats on your EC.
Amen to the all the comments above. You certainly made Vanessa live. Congratulations.