The Official Writing Challenge
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03/20/15
You've a talent for doing this form of writing. I always enjoy them. Beautiful.

God bless~
I thought this was really clever, as well as brilliantly done. You've defined and showed love, both in thought and action. Great piece and I hope it does well.
I like the way you presented "love in action.""
03/21/15
There are a lot of ways to show love as you have pointed out in your poem.

I like rhyming poetry the best and this is nicely put together. Blessings, LaVonne
03/21/15
Likeable
Openly encouraging
Vigerating
Entertaining

Inspiring
Tender
03/22/15
I enjoyed your exquisite work on this acrostic poem and this line made me smile, "Eating her burnt cooking and pretending that it’s fine." Your summary stanza was the icing on the cake. It's great to read your writing again.
Love your title, your beautiful stanzas! More! Feed me!
03/24/15
So well done.
This is my favourite form of poetry too. Rhyme, meter and rhythm are excellent and the practical message even better.
03/26/15
Congrats!

God bless~
03/29/15
Good thoughts. I like the way you crafted it. Congratulations!