The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/15
This will definitely be in the winner's circle. Powerfully executed in content and delivery!

I loved it.

God bless~
Moving poem. I love the metaphor of a broken vase and that it is a dialogue between the "I" and God. Interesting choice of rhyme pattern (abba).
I like the style of question and answer you chose for this your first and very good poem!
You grabbed my heart, squeezed it and wouldn[t release me to the last word. And I am breathless - you truly have God's gift for writing prose and poetry. I will keep my eyes open for you!
03/12/15
Once again, Congrats Milly, and I called it...knew you'd be in the winner's circle.

God bless~
Lovely, Milly. Congratulations!
03/12/15
This is a beautiful poem. I had to reread it to appreciate the challenging rhyme scheme. Your ending lines are perfect with a great message. Congratulations!
03/13/15
Congratulations, Milly, on your EC for this lovely poem.
Congratulations on this beautiful poem. I'm so glad it was a winner. Well deserved.