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Poignant. I like the self-envy angle.
Oh I love this story. I could take a page out of your MC's book. You did a great job of tackling the topic in a fresh and interesting way. Who would have though of being jealous of yourself, yet I totally relate. Great writing.
02/20/15
Different and creative approach to the topic.

I really enjoyed this!

Nicely done.

God bless~
Wow. I almost wrote mine about envying my much younger self, but you nailed the emotions perfectly - the before and after of coming to the Christ . . .
This was a great angle on the topic and very convincingly done.
02/20/15
Clever and creative POV.
You have avoided the ambush of self-indulgence, which is always lurking on the edges of stories like this. Well done.
Yes--you showed us--envying a younger you's appearance. Well done! I wouldn't mind to look younger and to be without the pains that happen with getting older, but I surely wouldn't want to that young girl again!
02/22/15
A very creative take on the topic. I wouldn't have thought of it myself but it works so well. Great job.
Congratulations! Happy Dance!!
02/26/15
Congrats!

God BLess~
02/26/15
Congratulations on your win.
I'm glad to see this excellent story in the EC list. Congratulations!