The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/15
The suspense in this story had me reading faster and faster. I love the twist at the end where the 'other woman' becomes the estate agent. Great paragraph to end with too.
Wow! A really powerful and on topic piece, which shows only too well how rage can take over and the dreadful consequences for all concerned. This was so well written. I hope to see this excellent and memorable piece do well.
02/19/15
Congrats on a well deserved win.
02/19/15
Congrats!

God bless~
02/19/15
Loved this story first time round and even more on second reading. Congratulations on a well deserved top spot.
02/19/15
Congratulations on a great entry and your well-deserved first place.
02/19/15
Congratulations, Francy. You deserve it for this wonderful entry. God bless.
Congratulations! This piece was truly something special.
02/19/15
Fantastic entry, I was totally hooked, and had a sick feeling before she ran into them that she'd misread everything. Very well written and absorbing. Congratulations!
02/19/15
Oh my gosh! I felt myself trying to put the brakes on as the character was going into rage... so sad what it can do and we don't even see it coming at times. I don't know how you could have written it any better. Congratulations!
02/19/15
Simply, WOW! Powerful writing and message. Excellent! Congrats, Francy!
02/21/15
Superb! Great job! A well deserved win! What a fine twist at the end.
02/25/15
So much suspense and sadness in your story. I always like to read your entries. Congratulations on your win!
03/21/15
The kind of real that makes me uncomfortable. Great job! Congratulations.