The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/15
Powerfully written!

God bless~
01/29/15
Very descriptive work, with a strong message flowing through it. Well done
02/01/15
Great writing, with a realistic transition of focus from wealth to mortal recognition to kneeling at the altar. Well done! Always great when we're left with hope for the protagonist.
02/01/15
Such vivid imagery in this powerful story! As your story so aptly messages, money does not buy love, happiness or contentment. The greatest riches of this world cannot be bought, but are gifted by God! I too love how you end the story with hope! Enjoyed the read!
Wow this is a stunning piece. Your developed your character brilliantly and painted wonderful pictures for my old tired brain. Spot on topic as well as a powerful message shows why this piece ranked 11 overall! Congratulations and Happy Dance!